Author's Note: In this piece I demonstrated my understanding of cause and effect on the reader's rubric using the book Flawless by Sara Shepard.
“I know
everything. I could RUIN YOU.”
–A She has the secrets and all he/she
needs is a chance to strike. To let
their dirty little secrets occupy the minds of the Rosewood residents. Everything will unfold perfectly from
there. Hanna, Aria, Emily, and Spencer
are recently bonded over the messages from this mysterious person. Accusations are bouncing back and forth and
the intensity continues. They only want
to know one thing. Who is A?
In the second book of Sara Shepard’s Pretty Little Liars series,
Flawless, there is no less drama than the first book. A main event in the plot is when all the
girls finally conclude that Toby Cavanaugh, a guy from each of their pasts that
has suddenly reappeared, is A. He has
been the one tormenting them. They are
frantic to get rid of him before anything bad happens, which they all assume
would be that Toby will murder them next just like he did to their friend
Ally. When Emily confronts him about it,
he flips, apologizing and crying, before he finally gives up and runs
away. This is only the beginning. Little did the girls know, he was confessing
to a different crime and this they find out when Toby ends up dead and a new message from A
pops up on their phones leaving the girls scarred and more confused than ever, “Don’t get too comfortable, it’s not over
until I say it is.” -A
All around Cassandra it was really good I liked the first paragraph it kept you "into the story" I guess I could say but in the 2nd paragraph you almost kind of rambled like you couldn't think of what to say but it wasn't a bad piece. The other thing is the 2nd to last sentence in the 2nd paragraph were it says "If Toby hadn't appeared in the book, the drama would drop to a 10 to about a 5." I think you meant to say If Toby hadn't appeared in the book, the drama would drop from a 10 to about a 5. Otherwise it was great:)
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