tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-852932151239304669.post961131734994175069..comments2013-06-10T06:36:51.337-07:00Comments on Color Outside the Lines: The Safe ZoneCassie http://www.blogger.com/profile/01127628668340421769noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-852932151239304669.post-32819264479331520912012-03-27T11:48:34.634-07:002012-03-27T11:48:34.634-07:00That was really good, I loved the way you kept the...That was really good, I loved the way you kept the reader wondering what exactly your talking about. I kept guessing what it was.Emily Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01411382315391992834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-852932151239304669.post-61257680072412077332012-03-26T09:07:20.545-07:002012-03-26T09:07:20.545-07:00Wow! You can definitely tell that you edited this!...Wow! You can definitely tell that you edited this! I really loved this piece because it painted a picture in my head and I could tell that you were tubing. Well, I'm pretty sure you were tubing with a friend. Anyways, this piece also made me make my own connections and think about times when I went tubing with my friends. I really liked it a lot because of that. I would just like to ask you about one thing. I got a little confused when I read a sentence towards the end, "Sometimes you stray far away you want to be, it'll be rough, but I always have to think something good is going to come out of this." In the beginning of this sentence were you trying to say, "Sometimes you stray far away from where you want to be..." I think that would clear things up a little bit for the reader. But overall, great job!AllisonLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02611938552168357821noreply@blogger.com